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  On the final day of the war "The woman and her rifle"

Back in 1848, there was a woman with her rifle. She was the most confident and fearless woman in tow. She was the protector of women's rights in her town called "Fair village". For the woman, the eighties was the most difficult time because the woman didn't have the right to vote or to speak for themself. They lived in a constant time of fear and scaredness. 

One night in town Mireya hears a voice, yelling for help. HELP! HELP! and then the voice stop. Mireya with a sleeping face stand up in her bed, she was completely sure that she heard something but she is confused because the voice stop. And them...... 


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